Wednesday 6 August 2008

Waiting for Immortality.

Waiting for Immortality.
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I was just too late

And you were far too early

Now I sit and paint

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7 comments:

  1. J. Andrew Lockhart6 August 2008 at 21:26

    straight to the point - a good one, too.

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  2. gautami tripathy7 August 2008 at 06:06

    As Andrew says, A good one.

    Thanks for visiting me.

    Yes, I would like to link your blog to mine.

    rooted

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  3. Cassiopeia Rises7 August 2008 at 10:20

    Hello Nick, I read your comment on rooted. I hope you don't mind my stopping by to have a look see. I have only read this first poem and I love it.
    If you are looking for links, please feel free to visit my web site
    I have more poetry site listed there that you might be interested in looking at. I have been posting my work since 2006.
    I also am an artist but have not done much lately. Your drawing fits your poem and images very well. It is great.
    I am know as Beloved Dreamer and my URL is
    http://www.beloveddreamer.com
    I am going to link with you as I want to come back.
    Hope to hear from you and welcome my friend.

    love-bd

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  4. Beatrice V17 August 2008 at 14:24

    I enjoyed this, very good.

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  5. lethalverses18 August 2008 at 13:23

    short - yet very powerful.

    reminds me of the brilliance of a Robert Frost.

    ...and I won't be surprised if you ARE of his descent.

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  6. Janine / Being Brazen25 August 2008 at 23:24

    Just discovering your blog. You have written some fabulous poems :)

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  7. Anonymous26 August 2008 at 08:49

    The words cut to the bone. Beautiful. And what a great profile.

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Thanks for your kind comments, critical comments are also welcome. Be sure to check back in a couple of days to see my response back to your comment, thanks again.