Friday, 5 September 2008

Kai's rhyme



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Upon an amber Moon
She hopes her dreams come soon
For she has a magic rhyme
All written out in line
And in the darkness of night
She looks up at the light
And in beauty she does see
The oneness there to be
And like the stars of the night
She creates her own light
In life’s sad and happy rhyme
Written upon false time
For she’s the light of the Moon
And the Sun light of noon


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This is Kai's rhyme from Kai's poetry
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14 comments:

  1. thank you so much
    i love it!

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  2. love the painting and the poem.

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  3. Gorgeous, friend. That is a beautiful poem to accompany your illustrations.

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  4. Oh, this ethereal painting and
    the beautiful poem are so well
    married together! Adore this!

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  5. have you draw michael jackson? i wanna learn how to draw him! :)

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  6. I love the flowing movement look in her hair. Beautiful poem done by Kai.

    Rhi

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  7. Wow Nick.

    and....besides this beautiful painting...

    this right here

    "In life’s sad and happy rhyme
    Written upon false time"

    is so profound.

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  8. and I meant to add ...

    very hauntingly beautiful...

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  9. The picture has a fairytale quality to it.

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  10. Oh, Rhymes!

    I love rhymes. Good one.

    (Saw you at Sarah's).


    Bard and Brain

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  11. Right poems to the right art. Art talent is a wonderful gift. Thank you for sharing.

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