Monday, 11 August 2008

Out of painful words.


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Out of painful words

Beauty will come to be heard

As rainfalls to earth

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So life can give birth

Create such sadness or mirth

On this little Earth

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For the saddest days

Like the early morning haze

From its own light raised

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So sadness and pain

Creates its own kind of gain

Just like falling rain

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So let's have some fun!

For all creation will come

From gray clouds and sun.

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15 comments:

Peg said...

Reminds me of Mulan! ;-0} There was a kid (seemed so to me) that was going to do drawings for me years ago...he went on to pry the door open at the Disney studios in CA. Guess he is doing well.
As I told Rhi on her blog, put up a portfolio in writers'-illustrators' site(s)see who takes a nibble.

Sincerely,
Peg

Kai C. said...

i like that

magiceye said...

absolutely!

sonia a.m. said...

Just beautiful!

Thanks for your nice visiting on my blog.

Janice Thomson said...

Love your work Nick - both your art and poetry. Look forward to many visits here.

Jimmy said...

Nice
soulful

I took it

Jarod K. Anderson said...

Quite uplifting.

Lahari Chatterji said...

I liked the third paragraph the most, the words together created a distinct feeling.

Jarod K. Anderson said...

Thanks for visiting my blog. Sure, I’d love a link. I’ll add you as well (if you don’t mind).

lethalverses said...

I must say I am so thankful for visiting my blog,and leaving your track there for I might never find this gem of a poetry blog...

nice metaphoric verses you got there; the calm yet sweet flowing rhythm accentuates the depth of your lines.

KEEP THIS UP!!! I'll add you on my blogroll...

Pagan Sphinx said...

I love these Oriental style images. Gorgeous.

Thank you for stopping by my blog. I'm only an art lover, lacking my own talent but joyously applauding that of others.

I look forward to roaming your pages.

Pagan

Shreeja said...

lovely...
I just chanced upon your blog, tracing your comment.
I'm glad that I did.
awesome stuff
:)

SandyCarlson said...

After an exchange of painful words with a beloved friend, I needed this. Thank you.

ardi k said...

Love your haiku. And artwork.

ardi k said...

Love your haiku. And artwork.